Tuesday, November 01, 2005

World's first blog story (4)
Please read the rules of this story-tag game at Rohan's site.

And the saga continues....

He had always known that silence spoke volumes, unfortunately it was in a language he failed to decipher on most occasions.A long pause.He stared for what seemed liked ages.It made little sense.May be it was'nt meant to be. He shrugged and looked at his friend. The pregnant silence was ruptured by his friends intermittent sobbing. Today was Diwali, it was supposed to be the "Festival of Lights", but things were different tonite. "Lights out", yelled the Jailor. The lights went out and the virgin night was silent and dark again. But, then was he reminded of his lover whose murder brought him here. All of a sudden, the summer heat in the cell, felt dreadfully cold, when, every moment of his past life flashed in front of his eyes as he stared at the writings on the wall .

10 Comments:

Blogger totti said...

Beautifully written :)

7:16 AM  
Blogger Point 5 said...

Thank u dude..this is exactly what I had in mind - FLASHBACK !!

Btw u forgot to give a link to Rohan's blog explaining the concept of story-tag ...

7:24 AM  
Blogger Rohan Kumar said...

Nice man, cant wait to see how this one goes from here :)

7:37 AM  
Blogger Susu said...

@totti: thanks :)

@point: well we think alike buddy.. Go Arouse Inc....I will prolly edit it and add that...

@rohan: Me too:)

8:48 AM  
Blogger Casablanca said...

Nooooo!!! I write sappy stuff... not murder stories (but I guess I do :p)
Ok ok... mind refuses to work right now. Will do this tomorrow, ya?

9:23 AM  
Blogger Rajesh said...

not really....but it was a snap which got thru email..anyways happy diwali!!!

9:24 AM  
Blogger Susu said...

@casa: Well.. the murder has to begin with a sweet love story.. and I think we can entrust you with that...

@rajesh: your first comment in my blog.. Happy Diwali to u too buddy:)

12:00 PM  
Blogger Point 5 said...

Dude..I am coming to SC for Thanksgiving !!

9:17 AM  
Blogger Susu said...

@pointy: hey awesome!!!!

6:25 PM  
Blogger totti said...

oh no! quick, we can still escape.i am sure pointy has been writing down all those dreadful pjs on pieces of paper.screw you pointy, we are going somewhere else.However, you are welcome to stay with balaji in the basement :P

7:18 PM  

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